E.M Show don't tell.

Hello! I hope you are having a great day! So today for literacy medals we are doing show and tell well this is not like a talent show but it's about writing. For example, making a boring sentence into a more sentence that has more detail. This took me about 5 minutes and I really enjoyed it! I found none of this hard because Miss Farr told us how to do it and what to do. I found none of this hard. Please go and check my work down below! Bye from Eden.