Hi Eden, I'm Bella from Yaldhurst model school in Rimu.I love your work it's so interesting with all of those facts. you enplaned your facts really well like an adult would.WELL DONEkind regards,Bella
Kia ora Eden! My name is Hana and I'm a year 5 From Yaldhurst Model School!Wow! I love the way you put in the transitions! They are really cool!There was a lot of interesting information in here! I learnt a whole lot whilst reading this!How long did it take you to do this?From Hana
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Hi Eden, I'm Bella from Yaldhurst model school in Rimu.
ReplyDeleteI love your work it's so interesting with all of those facts.
you enplaned your facts really well like an adult would.
WELL DONE
kind regards,
Bella
Kia ora Eden! My name is Hana and I'm a year 5 From Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteWow! I love the way you put in the transitions! They are really cool!
There was a lot of interesting information in here! I learnt a whole lot whilst reading this!
How long did it take you to do this?
From Hana
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